Sunday 21 September 2014

PEEL paragraphs

Why is Mr, Diver such a successful principal?

Mr Diver is a successful principal because he is a hard worker. To start with he works hard to get the students the best quality equipment. For example we are one of the only schools with a rock climbing wall but it's not just only the rock climbing wall he also aims for our school to have the sports gear in top condition. Secondly he manages to fit everything in yet still get involved, with being principal and having a big work load you still see him out side on the field and participating in everyday life. Also he works hard to make sure the school is on top of just about everything. What I mean by this is that each year he will work his hardest to make sure the school is at the top of the Aims Games each year. Finally he wants the school to have to best education in life, so he works hard to provide the students with overseas trips. Just recently Mr Diver created a trip to Thailand for the students to get a different look at life also with last years trip to Germany. Mr Diver works extremely hard for the students for the students to get these kinda of experiences. Overall these reasons are what makes Mr Diver a great principal.

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