Story writing

How long have you been in this foreign country?

Why did you go there?

Describe the two people who are with you.

How did you lose your passport?

What repercussions does losing your passport have?

When you went looking for your passport, where did you look?

When did you realise that someone was following you? Describe this person.

While you were running away, you tripped and fell. What happened?

What was the big surprise at the end of your story?

It has been 8 years nine months and 16 days since I have seen home, I was removed and sent to another country because of my anger issues along my two companions. One Mársilá, quite short and stubby, stupid, bald with no right eye or an arm which he lost while spazzing out, however Continó is quite the opposite. Tall, has a mop full of hair, and a brain like an ant yet no toes which of course he lost spazzing out too. The three of us has caused some serious damage around town, most permanent. So i figured we had to get out of there and take a new track and a new plan.

Making the new passports not real ones obviously, we make them look identical to the real ones but what we didn't realize was that as we are making them we had placed them on the cooking stove which had caused them to melt, however we didn't find that out until we were about to loose. "Mársilá you egg!" I screamed. "How could you do such a thing now were never going to be able to get out of here."

Instead of making new ones we decided that we would steal some, yet we didn't notice that someone was following us .